Friday, March 29, 2013

The ghost sighting part three

Note: I decided to just make the story and then make the changes later on in life.


Enchanted got out of his bed and went downstairs for a tiny breakfast because his mother keeps forgetting to go to the grocery store.  "Ugh mom can't you just remember to go to the store." said Enchanted.  "Sorry hun' but I keep forgetting, I'll try to remember today. But you have to go to school and if you don't go now the bus will leave you behind and you will be tardy." "Ugh, OK mom, I'm goin'."  When he went to the bus he saw in his reflection of all his classmates and the fat bus driver. They were skeletons, he freaked out and started running around in circles, but he didn't realize that all of his classmates and the fat bus driver were all laughing at him like crazy because they didn't see the skeletons in their reflections. Then an insulting look came from a wolf in a mask in a window, the ghost was laughing at him like crazy too!  He was so mad that he grabbed a heavy backpack for one of his random classmates and threw it at the window where the ghost was laughing like crazy and it broke right through the window.  The bus driver was so mad that smoke was coming out of his ears! Then he kicked Enchanted off the bus and drove off.  Then Enchanted said, "It's time to fight back!"  Then he heard a sound in the wind saying "Wasn't that funny? How all your classmates were laughing at you". "Huh? No, that wasn't funny," Enchanted exclaimed.


"Well it was for me, since you're the great great great great great great great ex. grandson of my most hated enemy! The one who killed me and stole me away from my family forever." The voice said.  Then there was a thing coming into sight. It was the ghost!  "Wai,t you sound like a girl, wait a minute are you a GIRL!?!"  "Yea, so what?" The ghost exclaimed.  "How can I stop this, I am being beaten up by a GIRL!"  "Well, you could bring back the souls of my family locked away in a secret cavern that no ghost could break through, but because you're related to the person who locked them away."  SO, when he got to the prison he saw the secret door. But then, he heard a different voice saying,"Do you really want to release an enemy's family?"  "Who are you?" Enchanted exclaimed.  "I am your ancestor."  Then an other voice appeared.  "Here, take this it will help you defeat him!" Then the other ghost appeared, and he turned out to be a fat, weird guy with a mole on his forehead.  "Wait, I"m related to this slob! And other ghost, he killed you?!"  "Well he worked out when he killed me."  So Enchanted just grabbed the sword and it went right through the weird guy and he poofed away.  Then he unlocked the cavern and 3 spirits popped out and surrounded the girl ghost, the girl ghost smiled and poofed away to another level in death , heaven.



                                                          The End

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